60 Second Television Broadcast Review Script
(Anchor/Restaurant Reviewer)
ARE YOU TIRED OF THE SAME TRADITIONAL TYPE DINNERS? COME TO TO THE MELTING POT WHERE YOU WILL HAVE A FOUNDUESTIC EXPIEREINCE!!
(Anchor/Restaurant Reviewer)
WE ARE INSIDE SAN JOSE’S MELTING POT RESTUARNT
AND ARE GOING TO TRY THE RESTAURANTS NEW CHOCOLATE FONDUE THIS MONTH THE RASBERRY DARK CHOCOLATE FONDUE THE CHEF WILL GIVE US A TASTE OF THIS DELELCTABLE TREAT. THIS FONDUE HAS A LITTLE BIT OF A NUT FLAVOR TWIST. IS THERE SOMETHING ELSE OTHER THAN RASBERRY AND CHOCLATE?
(Chef)
“This month’s chocolate fondue flavor is dark chocolate with raspberry
puree and a hint of hazelnut that adds a little bit of a different flavor to it."
(Anchor/Restaurant Reviewer)
COME TO TRY THE NEW RASBERRY CHOCLATE FONDUE
AT THE MELTING POT ON SOUTH FIRST STREET AND READ MY REVIEW THIS MONTH.
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2 comments:
Mouthwatering -- makes me was to go!
But you've got a few typos. You need to work on your proofreading skills.
Check the spelling:
FOUNDUESTIC EXPIEREINCE
RESTUARNT
RASBERRY
DELELCTABLE
CHOCLATE
No matter how engaging your writing style, if you can't produce clean error-free copy, you'll have a hard time getting anywhere in this field.
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