Smoking Wheels
Imagine witnessing smoke come from near the wheels of a plane that is about to fly off.
This is exactly what a landing tower employee saw coming from the wheels of a Northwest Airlines jet flight 428 plane at LaCrosse, Wisconsin, following a flight from Minneapolis at the Municipal Airport today. All forty passengers were evacuated from the flight.
Missing Boy
After missing for three years many would have given up hope for the search of a seven year old boy. But Monday night after three years the boy has finally been found.
The boy was found in Brick Township, New Jersey. A neighbor recognized the boy’s picture when it was shown after the movie Adam: The Song Continues and immediately called the police. The police arrested the boy’s mother Ellen Lynn Conner, 27; as she faces charges and interference with a custody warrant.
1 comment:
The point of this exercise is to get the 5Ws & 1H in the right order in a summary lead.
You seem to be trying to turn them into feature-style leads. Don't. Just write hard news, summary leads.
Please rewrite.
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