Lead Exercise # 2
One hundred thirty one people died yesterday in a U.S. airplane crash just outside of Pittsburgh. The crash is said to be one of the worst air crashes in the past three years in the United States.
Officials are still investigating the crash which was coming from Chicago and was said to crash when it was preparing to land.
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Good. You could still tighten it up a bit and make it a one-sentence lead.
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